Title: Process evaluation of a Participatory Ergonomics programme to prevent low back pain and neck pain among workers

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Author's response to reviews Title: Process evaluation of a Participatory Ergonomics programme to prevent low back pain and neck pain among workers Authors: Maurice T Driessen ([email protected]) Karin I Proper ([email protected]) Johannes R Anema ([email protected]) Paulien M Bongers ([email protected]) Allard J van der Beek ([email protected]) Version: 4 Date: 8 July 2010 Author's response to reviews: see over

Dear Editor, Thank you very much for the editing of my manuscript. I agree with most of the changes made by the editorial team. Besides responding on the specific queries I also checked the changes made by the editorial team. I agree with most of the changes made, but not all (see my changes in the textual comments section of this cover letter). By using ‘track changes’ I adopted my changes in the uploaded manuscript (Driessen ms (JA copyedit) 41410 GA_MD). Furthermore, I critically checked my reference list and replaced et al. for the authors’ names. May there be any questions, don’t hesitate to contact me. On behalf of all authors, Maurice Driessen

Response on JA comments: JA1: 1 Body@Work TNO VUmc, Research Center on Physical Activity, Work and Health, VU University Medical Center, van der Boechorststraat 7, 1081 BT Amsterdam, The Netherlands 2 Department of Public and Occupational Health, EMGO Institute for Health and Care Research, VU University Medical Center, van der Boechorststraat 7, 1081 BT Amsterdam, The Netherlands 3

TNO Quality of Life, Polarisavenue 151, 2132 JJ, Hoofddorp, The Netherlands

JA2: Please write as: Attitude - Social iInfluence -– Self- –Eefficacy JA3: By using the an 1-10 point scale (very unsatisfied to very satisfied), [GA3]satisfaction with the perceived implemented ergonomic measure(s) was assessed…. Textual comments: Abstract: an university Page 5: an RCT Page 5: Please replace this sentence: By using this classification, participating departments were randomised into either the intervention group (Stay@Work PE programme) or the control group (no Stay@Work PE programme). For the following sentence: Within each company, one randomisation pair of two departments with comparable workloads was randomly allocated to either the intervention group (Stay@Work PE programme) or the control group (no Stay@Work PE programme ). Page 6: “Stay@Work”{. Page 11: At tThe level of the participant was defined as the number of workers who filled out the baseline questionnaire. Page 11: Recruitment/ and reach Page 12: By using the same components (fidelity and satisfaction) and measures (1-10 point scale) the Stay@Work ergocoach training was evaluated. Page 13: This method enabled the investigators researchers to calculate for each ergonomic measure of interest a percentage of the perceived implementation. Page 15: By using a procedure similar to the one for dose delivered, an overall perceived implementation percentage could was calculated. Page 15: One department with a mixed workload (n = 103 workers) dropped out of the study due to a sudden reorganisation, and no working group was re-formed at that department. Page 17: The results of this process evaluation showed that PE can be a feasible and successful strategy to develop and carry out an implementation plan with….. Page 22: Overall, it can be concluded that the Stay@Work PE programme is a successful

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