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CULTURE NOTE Ernest Hemingway Known for his painfully proud protagonists, Ernest Hemingway made his mark as a writer of human—usually masculine—experience. His trademark minimalist style, which won him a Nobel Prize in 1954, has been imitated widely, though no one else has yet succeeded in capturing the angst of Hemingway heroes. From Jake Barnes in The Sun Also Rises to Frederick Henry in A Farewell to Arms, Hemingway heroes exhibit what Dorothy Parker identified as “grace under pressure,” handling tragedy straight-backed and silently.
A Man’s Man
Ernest Hemingway wrote about overtly masculine men, men who participated in traditionally “manly” pursuits such as hunting, camping, and fighting. Today, however, some people laud men for their sensitivity and ability to communicate their feelings, something Hemingway detested. To what extent are men stereotyped today? Observe advertising, entertainment, and other media to determine what characteristics comprise a stereotypical man today. OBSERVE YOUR WORLD
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Summaries Are Useful Imagine a world where no one could get to the point quickly. If you made a visit to a hospital emergency room, a chatty nurse might ask you about all sorts of irrelevant details: what sort of car you drive, where you live, what your hobbies are. While these questions might be interesting, they don’t help you get the aid you require. What you need is a nurse who can ask pertinent questions and sort through your answers to determine what kind of help to send. Summaries act the same way as an effective emergency room nurse. A summary concisely restates a longer document such as a lecture, essay, article, or book, emphasizing the key points and eliminating the less important details. When you write a summary, you use your own words, though you may want to borrow key phrases from the original. Summaries do not contain your opinions or views of the material you’re summarizing. Summaries present only what the original writer had to say. A summary contains the main points of the original but not the specific details unless one or more of them is unusually important. Thus, to write a good summary, you need to be able to tell the difference between what is important in a particular reading and what isn’t. Here are some examples of real-life situations in which summaries are helpful. ■ In meetings or academic group projects. Summaries are useful
where a small group of people needs to understand a lot of material quickly. For instance, if each group member reads just two or three articles and summarizes them, the whole group can learn a great deal of important information without having to read each article. Being accurate, then, is extremely important in summaries. ■ As study tools for students facing essay tests. Summarizing textbook chapters or class readings is an effective memory aid. Once you’ve written a summary, producing the same information under pressure (for example, during an essay test) is easier.
Writing an Effective Summary A good summary must be based on a thorough, thoughtful reading of the original text. A summary presents the main support points without misrepresenting the original. Here’s how to proceed. ■ Look over the document for clues about what’s most important. The
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body paragraphs, or the final paragraphs. Important ideas may also be identified through headings, italicized words, or words in bold type. Read the entire document to get a full understanding of it. The only way to accurately summarize a reading is to understand it completely. Read the full document slowly and carefully to get a general idea of what the writer is saying. Reread the document and underline the important ideas. If you can “connect” with the material you’re summarizing, you’ll be more likely to understand and remember it. After your first reading of the material, reread it and underline or highlight key ideas. If you’re not sure whether to underline a section, mark it and move on. Then, when you’re writing your summary, decide how important the questionable details are; you can include or omit them at that time. Summarize using your own words but keeping the same order as that of the document. It may be tempting to use the author’s style when writing your summary, but resist that temptation. Your job is not to entertain or persuade anyone; all you have to do is present the author’s material accurately. Present the information in your summary in the same order that the writer uses in the original document. Do not use expressions like “the author claims” or “the writer points out,” which are unnecessary and make the summary longer than it has to be. Check your summary against the original. After you’ve drafted your summary, make sure that you have included the important details and omitted secondary or irrelevant details. Your summary should devote space, proportionately, to key points as the original does. For example, if an article devotes one paragraph to each of two points and three paragraphs to one point, then you should give that same percentage of space to those points in your summary. Additionally, make sure the information in your summary is accurate—don’t exaggerate or downplay details. Since a summary will often be used in place of the original, accuracy is essential. Revise your version for the first three of the four Cs: concise, credible, and clear writing. Check to make sure that your summary has no unnecessary words or phrases. Remember: the benefit of a summary is brevity, so omit anything not absolutely essential to communicating the points of the original. Also, make sure that the connections between ideas are clear and logical. Proofread your summary. Correct any errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Follow the tips from Chapter 7 for help with proofreading. Document your source. In a note at the end of the summary, include the author’s name and the title and publication dates of the book, magazine, journal, or newspaper where you found the original article.
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A Model Summary The following is a summary of an essay that appears in Chapter 21 (page 325). The original is approximately 1,300 words long, but the summary is about 190 words. Note that the writer includes some quotations from the essay but few specific details.
Summary of Ernest Hemingway’s “Camping Out” In the essay “Camping Out,” Ernest Hemingway explains how knowledge of bugs, bedding, and cooking is necessary for successful camping. First, you must come prepared to repel insects by bringing, and later rubbing on, oil of citronella and by sleeping under a mosquito net. Otherwise, your neck will resemble “a relief map of the Caucasus.” Second, you need to prepare an outdoor bed. To sleep “warm and get your rest,” bring “just double the bedding” you think necessary, and then place two-thirds of that bedding under you. Finally, cooking is the most significant skill in terms of making or ruining a camping trip. Hemingway explains the necessary tools and ingredients—from a frying pan and cans of shortening to prepared pancake flour and bacon—to make a tempting meal. He also offers specific cooking details, including how to cook over coals, use bacon to baste trout, and time different dishes to finish cooking together. Hemingway’s final cooking instructions give stepby-step instructions for a man to make a pie “as good as his wife.” Following these steps, says Hemingway, make “the real woodsman,” or someone who can be “really comfortable in the bush.” Hemingway, Ernest. “Camping Out.” Patterns of Reflection. Ed. Dorothy Seyler. New York: Longman, 2004: 240.
EXERCISE 1 A N A LYZING A SUMMARY Read the summary of Hemingway’s essay on camping. Then, answer the questions below. In his essay “Camping Out,” Ernest 1. What is the thesis of the summary? _____________________________ Hemingway explains how knowledge of bugs, bedding, and cooking is ______________________________________________________________ necessary for successful camping. ______________________________________________________________
2. What three areas does Hemingway organize his essay into? _______ Bugs, sleeping, cooking ______________________________________________________________
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3. What suggestion does Hemingway offer for repelling insects? Using oil of citronella ______________________________________________________________
4. To which of the three areas of camping does Hemingway give his Cooking; he describes necessary greatest attention? How can you tell? ___________________________ tools and ingredients and gives pie-making instructions ______________________________________________________________ Someone who 5. How does Hemingway define the “real woodsman”? ______________ can be really comfortable in the bush ______________________________________________________________
EXERCISE 2 SUMMARIZE A READING FOR THIS CLASS Choose one of the following readings from this book. “Anywhere But Here: More Connected But More Alone” by Anne Taylor Fleming (page 371) “Always Running” by Luis J. Rodriguez (page 260) “Urban Renaissance Meets the Middle Ages” by Steve Lopez (page 346) Write a one-paragraph summary of the reading. Be sure to follow the guidelines for writing a summary.
EXERCISE 3 SUMMARIZE A READING FOR ANOTHER CLASS Write a one-paragraph summary of a chapter from a book you are reading for another class. Concentrate on including those ideas that you think you’ll need to remember for an exam. Then, follow the guidelines for writing a summary.
Reports Are Relevant We often find ourselves giving a summary of something that happened—an event at work or school, a situation involving friends or family, or an occurrence on the road, for instance—and then explaining how that event affected us. Telling a friend how the three-lane pileup on the freeway was poorly handled by the highway patrol, causing you to be unnecessarily late to work, makes clear not only what happened but why the occurrence was relevant.
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If you are explaining or evaluating a situation or event after you’ve given a summary of it, you are giving a report. Essentially, reports are summaries with an analysis or evaluation added. Reports are useful in everyday situations such as the following: ■ In school. When you need to write an analysis of a movie, play, concert,
display, or book, a report gives your reader the necessary details to understand what the event was and why it was or was not effective or entertaining. ■ At work. When you need to evaluate a new product, program, or employee, a report is effective. Further, understanding your company’s review system can help you prepare for your own employee evaluations.
Writing a Report in Two Steps Writing a report requires all the same skills as writing a summary plus one more: analysis. While the purpose of writing a summary is to communicate a longer piece of information in a brief format, the purpose of a report is to offer your view of the work in addition to the summary. Here are the steps in preparing a report. ■ Write a summary of the piece, including all necessary publication
information. Include the title, author, publisher, and place and date of publication. ■ Write your opinion of the piece. Be sure to include a thesis statement that makes clear your view of the piece, and support your thesis with examples from the original work. If you claim that a product is ineffective, for instance, you need to show the ways in which the product is ineffective. Depending on the type of report you write, you may evaluate the piece based on criteria determined by someone else (an employer or instructor, say) or based on your own criteria: what you look for in this type of piece, product, or film; how this particular piece, product, or film measures up to your expectations and experiences.
A Model Student Report The report at the top of the next page was written by Brian for an American literature course.
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A Review of Ernest Hemingway’s The Old Man and the Sea While Ernest Hemingway’s short novel The Old Man and the Sea revitalized his career, it is really a depressing book. The entire story revolves around the old man, Santiago, trying to land a prizewinning marlin, the catch of a lifetime. For eighty-four days, Santiago catches nothing, and the parents of his devoted apprentice force the boy to work for a more productive boat. Santiago, however, never gives up; he remains confident that his luck will change. On the eighty-fifth day, Santiago’s luck does change: he hooks a marlin and begins a two-day (and two-night) battle. Eventually, after being dragged in his boat while holding the fishing line, Santiago hauls in the fish. However, the sea reclaims its prize, and Santiago ends up as he began: poor, tired, and luckless. I can’t say I enjoyed the book because it’s so sad, but there’s a sort of triumph in the way Santiago keeps fighting, even when he’s exhausted and bloodied from the battle. However, the victory of the story comes with Santiago’s success in battling the fish; even though he is old, tired, and hungry, Santiago “fights the good fight” and catches the fish of a lifetime. Ernest Hemingway is known for writing about people who ultimately lose—their jobs or battles, their loves, their lives—but who are triumphant in simply making a good showing. Santiago certainly puts up a good fight, one I’m sure Hemingway would be proud of, but the fact that he ultimately loses the marlin and returns, beaten and bloodied but without his catch, makes the short novel hard to enjoy. Notice that Brian’s work includes two parts: a summary of the book and Brian’s evaluation of it. Brian’s opinion—that the book is depressing—does not have to agree with what professional critics would write. As long as he can support his main ideas using examples, which Brian does, his report works.
A Professional Report Read the following movie review by a professional writer.
Review of A Farewell to Arms Michael W. Phillips I recently read Ernest Hemingway’s A Farewell to Arms, which is one of the most beautiful and heartbreaking novels
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I’ve ever read. This early adaptation of it, a prestige picture that was nominated for four Oscars, is an acceptable adaptation. It keeps the main themes of the book, telescopes a lot of events because of time constraints, and puts a censor-acceptable stamp of approval on the relationship at the center of the film. It’s not as good as the book, but it succeeds in its own right, which is really all I ask of adaptations. Gary Cooper stars as Frederick Henry, the American ambulance driver who enlisted with the Italians so that he could fight the good fight in World War I; his own government hadn’t gotten around to realizing that Continental affairs affect the United States too. (None of this is explained in the film; he might as well have been an Italian driver who spoke English with a Montana accent.) He spends his time carousing with his best friend and “war buddy” Rinaldi, played with zest and energy by the great Adolphe Menjou, who calls him “baby” and entices him to go on a double date. Rinaldi has his eye on a British nurse, Catherine Barkley (Helen Hayes), and the idea is that Frederick will pair up with the dour Ferguson (Mary Philips), but he has other ideas after he sees Catherine. I was going to say “luminous Catherine” or “beautiful Catherine,” but Helen Hayes was not really either. I wrote in my notes “odd little face,” and she certainly has one. She didn’t start to be really luminous and beautiful until she was in her forties, when she started to play “mom” and then “grandma” roles; she was most arresting as the little old lady in her Oscar-winning turn in Airport. Here, she looks like, well, a young little old lady. It doesn’t help that she only comes up to just under Cooper’s shoulder. Real-life relationships are often like this—I’ve dated women a full foot shorter than me—but they look a bit odd onscreen. Catherine and Frederick quickly become attached to each other. There’s a creative diegetic ellipsis the first time they make love: he kisses her, and the camera pans up to the city skyline, where bombs can be seen exploding. The screenplay gets a little hesitant in discussing the consummation of their relationship, which occurs quite early and well before the bonds of matrimony; there are veiled statements about “it” and “last night.” Frederick is sent to the front, where he’s injured, and Catherine is sent to Madrid, but the two of them are reunited when Rinaldi pulls some strings. There’s some odd first-person camera work as Frederick is initially brought into the hospital, where doctors lean down into the camera to talk to “him,” and Catherine shoves her face into the lens for a kiss, her cheek squashed onto the glass, as Frederick informs her that she’s beautiful.
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They share a happy few weeks together, and are even sort of married, until Frederick is sent off to the front again. But nothing can separate true love, especially star-crossed love like this, and both Frederick and Catherine are willing to abandon everything—including their loyalty to the Italian army and the British medical corps— to be together. Admittedly, the film goes in fits and starts. There are great individual scenes, then extremely rushed transitions as the film runs to catch up with Hemingway’s plot. The highlight of the film is a wordless one: a devastating montage illustrating Frederick’s desertion from the army explains concisely the statement “war is hell.” It is in this montage that the film earns its Oscars for Best Sound Recording and for Charles Lang’s cinematography. The melodramatic ending bothered me a bit, but it’s because I was expecting the novel’s understated resignation. It’s still pretty darned good. Gary Cooper is a little stiff, as he often was; this was one of his first starring roles, and he’s listed as second fiddle to Helen Hayes, who was coming off an Oscar-winning performance in The Sin of Madelon Claudet. Indeed, she’s the real star here. She captures the character’s eccentricities very well. There’s just enough of a touch of the unstableness that helped define Hemingway’s character to come across without having her resort to histrionics. Adolphe Menjou is a delight as Rinaldi, and Jack La Rue is quietly moving as the priest who has grown disillusioned with humanity’s prospects in the face of constant war. In addition to the two Oscars it won, the film was nominated for Best Art Direction and Best Picture, which it lost to Cavalcade. Phillips, Michael W. Review of A Farewell to Arms, dir. Frank Borage. goatdog’s movies, 2004. 3 Jan. 2006. .
EXERCISE 4 A N A LYZING A REPORT Read the review of the movie A Farewell to Arms by Michael W. Phillips. Then, answer the questions below. It’s an “acceptable 1. What is the writer’s overall opinion of the movie? ________________ adaptation.” ______________________________________________________________
2. What areas does the writer discuss in order to support his opinion? Character development, acting, action, photography ______________________________________________________________
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EXERCISE 5 WRITING A REPORT FOR SCHOOL Write a report about a book you’ve read for school this year. The book may be fiction or nonfiction, and it may be assigned for your writing course or another course.
EXERCISE 6 WRITING A REPORT FOR WORK Write a report about a procedure at your job. (If you do not work, write a report of a procedure—such as registration or adding/dropping a course—at your school.)
WRITING PRACTICE 1 Write a Summary of an Article Read an article from a magazine or newspaper. Then, write a one-paragraph summary of it. Make sure you include only those details that are necessary to communicate the main point of the article. Include a copy of the article when you hand in your summary.
WRITING PRACTICE 2 Write a Summary of an Oral Presentation Watch a television program, or listen to an interview on the radio. Then, write a one-paragraph summary of the program or interview. Begin your summary by stating the name and date of the program or interview you’re summarizing. For instance, write, “On July 24, 2005, the Discovery Channel’s program Tour de France showed Lance Armstrong cycling to his seventh consecutive Tour de France France victory.”
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WRITING PRACTICE 3 Write a Review of a Recorded Performance Watch a concert, film, or other performance. Then, write a review of the performance. Be sure to include both a summary of the work and your views of the recorded performance.
WRITING PRACTICE 4 Write a Review of a Live Performance Attend a sporting event, concert, speech, or other performance or event. Then, write a review. Be sure to include both a summary of the material and your views of the live performance.
Lab Activity 28 For additional practice with writing summaries, complete Lab Activity 28 in the lab manual packaged with your textbook. If you did not receive a lab manual, you can complete this activity online at www.ablongman.com/long. Click on College Resources for Writers and then click on Activity 28.
